Bravo!! hehe this was really cute -- no wonder you won, how awesome ^_____^ *high five*

I had no idea you were so talented ^^

--
She breaks a bottle, lets it slip
As if the whipping wind could lash,
Could drag it gently from her grip--
She smiles,
and the green shards flash
between her parted lips.

haha I was debated whether to answer all you comments in one post or just reply to each one individually and realized I dont know where to post if I wanted to just reply at once >.<;; ahh I am DA illiterate XD >.<;; But seriously thank you for all the compliments! ^^ XD I think I was really just lucky with winning this contest because I am still having no success with getting an art job >.<; But then maybe I am not doing a good enough job at job hunting?? XDD haha if only I put as much effort into that as I did with yaoi, writing and drawing things for fun >.<;; hehehe ah wells hahaha
and as for being talented I think you're well beyond my level ^^ XDD I have only always kept thinking and wanting to draw a manga but you have one going I think that it's totally awesome ^^ and your a great story teller + artist <33 Please keep it up! ^^ I can't wait to see what happens to Bird heeheehee ah his name is Adia XDD But I liked Bird for some reason >.<; XDD
eep this is a long comment but I try to make up for not coming on here too often.. (haha I always get discouraged because I never draw as much as I look at other ppls drawings >.<;; *glances at the 300+ watches waiting for her to view* ehhehehe) XDD

I don't have an art job either, that would be soooo awesome to be an illustrator or just a plain artist for a living! I would die of happiness. But as for now I'm just payin the bills ^^

Hehe thank you for the compliment, I will definitely continue with the story. I think I will be doing at least a few pages this weekend XD I took a break after finishing ch 1 but now I"m going to get back on track XD

300 watches waiting!!! OMG that's a lot!

--
She breaks a bottle, lets it slip
As if the whipping wind could lash,
Could drag it gently from her grip--
She smiles,
and the green shards flash
between her parted lips.

You did a eat job on these I just read them all and I love how well you captured the essence of all the characters and their stories.

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I found a criminal use for your pillow
I love you terribly, I swear that this is true
But I just can't stop my hands from smothering you